Overall, the whole comic is very nice. It's enjoyable and (as nearly everyone has said before) cute. I like Axel and Roxas in it, and Axel looks fine. Roxas, on the other hand... not so good. Kinda painful, actually. His hair is okay, but his face is "squished" (for lack of a better word). I don't want to be harsh (I don't think I am), but it's just how I feel.

Zack is too cute for words, though. ^_^