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[luco]

Wow, I've been pretty quite all week huh? Ah well, it's been...interesting to say the least. Anyways, I have the next page of legend and the last one to feature the Seaburgers ^___^ I hope people have enjoyed the time they got to spend with them, but now, we're heading to the surface!





And yeah...that's my apology ^___^

Comments

[ripfangdragon.livejournal.com]

AHH!! Poor Seaburger family ; ; *hugs mama!burger*

[maldoror-gw.livejournal.com]

*is scarred for life*
*at least until the next page*

Oooh, the surface and Zoro...can't wait!! Did I mention the art and characters and physiques are gorgeous and stunning? I particularly like Sanji in panels 2 and 4, you do such great work on his expressions.

[white_aster]

oh god, the poor mama seaburger. Your teary eyes KILL ME. ;;;;____;;;;

[luco-millian.livejournal.com]

I had a feeling I'd make people sad.....

[luco-millian.livejournal.com]

Sorry?

Well, not really, but yeah. And that second panel took quite a bit of playing to look right ^___^ I'm getting better at drawing him though ^____^

[luco-millian.livejournal.com]

Opps? ^_____^

I'm trying to feel sorry, I really am, but it's juts not working...

[white_aster]

^___^ You could always have an omake afterwards? "Revenge of the Seaburgers"? With Mama Seaburger and co. going all military, with little combat helmets and seaburger rocket launchers! ^____^

[luco-millian.livejournal.com]

*laughs* That would be amusing indeed! Or maybe I could....yeah! they would fit into the story right there!

I've got it!

Thanks ^___^

[white_aster]

Yay! :) :pets the seaburgers:

[luco-millian.livejournal.com]

They will get their revenge, I can promise you that ^___^

[neko-geek.livejournal.com]

It's wonderful! I love it. And the baby seaburgers and the mama seaburgers are great. I love the teary eyes...



Unfortunately I found one thing that confused me... Papa seaburgers seems to have too many joints on one side... All the other seaburgers have one joint on the limbs... But on the last panel the break is after the joint... Then you look at the limb in mama seaburgers arms and the break is before the joint... So the question is: Am I seeing things or is the seaburger too many jointed?

[luco-millian.livejournal.com]

Aww damn ;___; I missed that when drew it...

*makes a note to go back and fix that*

Thanks for pointing that out for me. I can be an idiot sometimes.

[cptn-shinigami.livejournal.com]

O_o woah, good eyes there (though I was paying more attention to the bone sticking out of his poor little arm/fin) Let's pretend they broke it in Mama Seaburgers valiant attempt to save her beloved *glances from side to side awkwardly*

I liked very muchly! Yay for the next installment, oh please have Zeff next X3 I want to see his 'half' tail XD

[neko-geek.livejournal.com]

It's not being an idiot. I just thought you would like to know...

Don't feel bad! ;_; I didn't mean to make you feel bad... ;_;

[luco-millian.livejournal.com]

Tis okay, I did want to know ^___^ i'm just feeling a little bit silly right now. It'll just remind me to pay more attention to what I'm drawing...

[luco-millian.livejournal.com]

Zeff....won't show up for awhile, but I do think he kinda makes an appearance (flashback-like) in a few pages.....

[regicidaldwarf.livejournal.com]

Oh god the mama seaburger! ;__; (At the same time, though, I'm kinda cracking up. xD) Um, I also love that little fish in the background in the last panel. He totally looks like he's going "omg WHUT." Hee. xD

[ripfangdragon.livejournal.com]

>> don't get me wrong. I'd rather see Chopper and Sanji NOT hungry over a torn apart seaburger familt XD;;

[dried-frog-pill.livejournal.com]

;_;

No, I'm really cracking up laughing now too. Mrs Seaburger's face, poor dear. Oh the saga of the seaburgers, I love it XD XD XD

Chopper, he's just misdirecting you. As soon as you start enjoying your lunch, all distracted with food, he'll wander off again, rather like how pirate-love-cook!Sanji does in the manga XD Love love love Sanji's expressions, especially the middle panel. And love his hands, too.

[cephy.livejournal.com]

*snrk* I like the li'l baby seaburgers' expressions. Sort of ".....omg." Very cute.

[mailechan.livejournal.com]

Awwww, look at poor mama seaburger's eyes! *sniffles*

Aagh! He ripped the leg right off!

That was a great page! *loves*

Say, I need to talk to you sometime to get picture titles. What do you think?

[xtranew.livejournal.com]

Have I mentioned how much I love you? Because I do, I do, I told you.

The second panel is my favorite in this page (no offense for the mourning Seaburger family), Sanji's expression is just... Sanji-like? And, and how you made Sanji took off to making lunch?! He wouldn't ignore his life-calling---even though the prospect of meeting a cutie, supposedly legendary healer of the sea 'Marimo' was very, very tempting. Right, cooking comes first, at least in Sanji's case. LOL.

[luco-millian.livejournal.com]

*purrrrrrrs*

[luco-millian.livejournal.com]

Oh I was laughing the whole week cause I knew what would be happening ^___^ Wish I had had the time to post it earlier but yeah..

The little fish is going to be swimming very far away very, very fast once he's overcome his shock.

[luco-millian.livejournal.com]

Awww, you're laughing through your tears ^____^

Shush! Chopper don't listen to her! Sanji would never do that >_>;;

...

Okay so he does disappear quite a bit...but still!

[luco-millian.livejournal.com]

They are probably going to have nightmares for the rest of their lives....or else have a very good dinner ^___^; I'm not sure if they eat meat or not >_>

[luco-millian.livejournal.com]

Titles.....I suck at titles......but umm.

I think I may be free Tuesday or Wednesday evening to discuss, unless you just want to do it through emails?

[luco-millian.livejournal.com]

I was wondering what your response would be.

You're right, that last panel on it's own, could very well be heart-breaking. Opps. Anyways...the next page is actually inked so you guys may get it sometime during the week. I actually had to break a page into two parts so I could fit the Seaburger's Good-bye into the story, thus going up to the surface had to be delayed by a page. Such is life.

And you called me Miss again ^___^ Which makes me happy until I finish the sentance and then I just want to laugh.

[luco-millian.livejournal.com]

That page looked completely different when I inked it the first time. I actually had to sit there and erase his expression and redraw it a couple of times before I got the proper look. Good to know the effort was worth it ^_____^

Luv is good.

[sunless-death.livejournal.com]

;_; poor wibbling mama Seaburger. You know that this will just lead to "My name is Inigo Seabgurger! You killed my father! Prepare to die!!!"
And somehow the little sidestory has taken over, and I'vev forgotten the actual plot. -_-
Sanji's face in the fourth panel is perfect! He knows where his priorities lie!
Thank you for another enthralling installment.

[kala-aira.livejournal.com]

OH! Poor momma seaburger...I hope they had seaburger life insurence or something. And the children! What therapy they'll have to go through now!

And I love how Sanji told Chopper that he doesn't have to worry about him "right now". I can't wait until he manages to sneak away and is horribly disapointed. ^___^

[cosmiko-ling.livejournal.com]

The last we'll see of the Seaburgers? Aww... Even if I was a coldhearted creature who hadn't felt much for them as food before, the Mrs looks so sad in the last panel... it's the last she'll see of her husband too...

Chopper is adorable~ I can imagine how he says "yeah!" in reply to Sanji.
Though you're not looking for icons anymore, Chopperfish should get an icon too~! :P

[luco-millian.livejournal.com]

*laughs* I can soo see that happening ^___^ But sadly, it won't. I'm not suprised that the side-story took over, the plot hasn't really been introduced yet, so yeah. Well be getting to that soon >_>

[luco-millian.livejournal.com]

MWAHAHAH! Poor Chopper is too easily distracted. He's far too trusting to be stuck taking care of someone as sneaky as Sanji....

And ummm, therapy...yeah, I guess those kids will need it...

[luco-millian.livejournal.com]

AWWWWWW! That is too cute ^_____^ I have a Chopperfish icon now!!! Thankies!!

didn't think i'd happen

[(Anonymous)]

I thought he would at least glance it must be my impatiant self but the burgers are so cute in this one

[rhythmia.livejournal.com]

*is compelled to delurk just to wibble* *WIBBLES*

....

I'm with the other commenters on seaburger revenge, ehehehe. At least they have a limb to remember Mr. Seaburger by, but their expressions! *wibbles some more on their behalf*

And now for a more coherent reply. ;P I happened on your journal about page 6 and have been stalkingfollowing ever since, and I've gotta say, I really really like the drawing style. Your expressions are so clear, and they always fit the characters so well. (Chopperfish dance! all of Sanji's expressions! Chopperfish hanging out like a kittycat! That image is engraved in my brain, by the way).

So do you draw the pictures and ink 'em by hand, and are the background bits CG? They look kinda like marker to me, and if they are, well...*drools in envy* Your crosshatching and other shading are just awesome, and I really really like the different shades/blends in the fins.

[luco-millian.livejournal.com]

Awww, well I'm glad you felt compelled to comment, it's always nice to know who is actually reading this and that they are enjoying it!

And yes, I draw them by hand and ink them by hand. I can't afford the markers thus everything else is done on the computer ^___^ The fins are my favourite thing to shade as they're all shiny and multi-layered...it tempts me to do more coloured pictures just so I can play with their fins >_>

Anyways, hope you continue to enjoy this!

[salmon-pink.livejournal.com]

Seaburger! *whimpers*