Hmm.... Keep in mind I'm not an art person, this is just how it looks to me.
I Lurrrve their expressions and Yuber sticking his tongue out at Albert. (He is sticking his tongue out, right? That's what it looks like to me.) And Albert's all "Yeah, ok, so you're on top. So what?" Mrrrrr....
Two things pop out at me as being off: first, Yuber's back looks like it's arching where it shouldn't. In the middle of the back, where normally it would dip down away from the shoulders before curving out again at the tailbone, instead it's arching out, which looks...vaguely uncomfortable. Second...is it me, or do Yuber's thighs look veeeery long, compared to Albert's? Overall, Yuber looks bigger than Albert, which is partly because of his position, but also, I think, because Yuber looks like if he stood up, he'd be about a foot or two taller than Albert. Is he too LONG somewhere? (shut up, Yuber...) :looks again: Yeah...I mean, look at his arms and his thighs. His thighs are as long as his whole arm. I know that, using me as a measuring stick, that's much longer than my thighs are, proportionally. But...that might just be my short bias. ;P
Other than those things, it looks great and mmrrrrrrworthy. ^___^ See why I chuck bunnies at you? Because you reward me doing so with lurvely art! ^________^
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Date: 2004-06-01 12:41 pm (UTC)I Lurrrve their expressions and Yuber sticking his tongue out at Albert. (He is sticking his tongue out, right? That's what it looks like to me.) And Albert's all "Yeah, ok, so you're on top. So what?" Mrrrrr....
Two things pop out at me as being off: first, Yuber's back looks like it's arching where it shouldn't. In the middle of the back, where normally it would dip down away from the shoulders before curving out again at the tailbone, instead it's arching out, which looks...vaguely uncomfortable. Second...is it me, or do Yuber's thighs look veeeery long, compared to Albert's? Overall, Yuber looks bigger than Albert, which is partly because of his position, but also, I think, because Yuber looks like if he stood up, he'd be about a foot or two taller than Albert. Is he too LONG somewhere? (shut up, Yuber...) :looks again: Yeah...I mean, look at his arms and his thighs. His thighs are as long as his whole arm. I know that, using me as a measuring stick, that's much longer than my thighs are, proportionally. But...that might just be my short bias. ;P
Other than those things, it looks great and mmrrrrrrworthy. ^___^ See why I chuck bunnies at you? Because you reward me doing so with lurvely art! ^________^
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Date: 2004-06-01 01:21 pm (UTC)Okay I can see how too fix that now!!!
For every bunny you chuck at me...they breed until I have about 7 or 8 and then you throw another!
But I can't complain since it keeps me busy ^_____^
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Date: 2004-07-19 03:14 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2004-07-24 04:20 pm (UTC)