Date: 2010-02-18 02:56 am (UTC)
Actually, I think this is pretty good! :)

Especially like the humor woven through it-- He admits he could have done a better first-aid job, but he honestly hadn't thought the meeting would take as long as it did.

Or that he would pass out from blood-loss.
... Yeah, that sounds just like Zuko. xD
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