Here we go.

[luco]

Finally, another page ^___^ And Chopper really does steal the show doesn't he?

Not too happy with this one either, but I think I'm just being really picky ^^;;




To all those who thought the little critte from three(?) pages ago was cute...I'm sorry ;__;


And now, I need to work on my walk cycle. Depending on how well that goes I may or may not have time to work on more art. Also, choose a number between 1 and 4. Which ever one gets the most votes is the one I'll work on if I can ^__^ And no, I'm not telling you what each is...

Comments

[kaizoku-shinobi.livejournal.com]

Oh, some critique.

Change the speech bubbles if you can. You see how in mangas the speech bubble change to fit the mood? Try that, it'll help show the volume and emoion of the words.

If you can't then it's not a big deal, Legend's still awesome.

[luco-millian.livejournal.com]

That is something I should have paid more attention too...

Hmmm, it'll take a bit of extra work but it is doable ^___^ Maybe I'll go back at a later date and fix the earlier pages, but for now I'll keep it in mind as I work on the new ones.

Thanks.