*sighs*

[luco]

Well, the roughs of the 'tie' comic are done. It isn't as good as I wanted, but they are the roughs so I'll play with them at a later date and see if I can get them to work the way I want.

But, these should give you the basic idea of what I was after.....

And believe it or not, I'm actually nervous about posting this one. Don't know why, but I am....well, here it goes.

Hopefully you can read my writing and well, ignore any mistakes. I see them and have marked them down and will fix them when I do the good copy.

















Now to go work on the things I'm actually suppose to be doing >_>;

Comments

[stephaniecmc.livejournal.com]

The only thing that stands out to me is the 2nd panel at the top...Sanji's face looks kinda disproportionate...kinda like his ears and mouth belong on one face and his love-eye belongs on another face...did that make sense at all? *scratches head*

And maybe Robin's sentence is missing something: "You'd be willing to let me (see?) something as beautiful as that, wouldn't you?"

I love the mini comic, though... I'm not much of a Robin fan...but for this... I've got my pompoms and a big 'Go, ROBIN!!who is actually luco in disguise' banner flying out my balcony ^____________^

[luco-millian.livejournal.com]

I know that panel is horrible and I knew that somehow I would get the writing wrong ^^; That's what happens when you just go with it....I get so lost in the work and it makes sense in my head so I don't see when things are missing. Thanks though.

And there is no way I could ever be Robin, but the thought is nice >_>

[prettyarbitrary.livejournal.com]

I LIKE TIES!

[luco-millian.livejournal.com]

I adore them ^____^

[inferni-spei.livejournal.com]

I love it
I love you
Plain and simple ^^

[luco-millian.livejournal.com]

The love is much appreciated ^____^

[farfan.livejournal.com]

O.O *faints over drooling*

*wakes up* *looks again at the comic*

*faints again*

*wakes up again*


*looks again*

I love it!!!

*faints again with a dreaming expression on her face*

[luco-millian.livejournal.com]

*puts a blanket over you and leaves you to your dreams* Enjoy.

[the-shy-wolf.livejournal.com]

♥ LOVE! ♥ LOVE! ♥ LOVE! ♥

The pannel where Robin says :Cook-San is more than a match for four horses.Far more strength and grace. She looks firgging fanatsic!

♥

[luco-millian.livejournal.com]

So I actually did a panel where Robin looks good? That actually suprises me....I really need to practice drawing her....

[aerlyn.livejournal.com]

Oooh...This is absolutely beautiful. I love the sense of pacing, both in the text, and in the switch between Robin and Zoro as the dominant presence. That last line gives me shivers, too!

[luco-millian.livejournal.com]

It was suppose to, so I'm glad it worked ^____^

[tresa-cho.livejournal.com]

Wow that's brilliant. I am horrible at drawing, so I can't really help at all. Sorry!

[luco-millian.livejournal.com]

As long as you like it, I'm happy.

[onnaevilsmith.livejournal.com]

Very brilliant! Is that Tie story really true?

[luco-millian.livejournal.com]

The '4-in-Hand' bit is true and it's a fact that has always amused me so I wanted to play with it.

[salmon-pink.livejournal.com]

Oh, Robin is a blessing to fangirls everywhere, isn't she? Love how he walked into it so beautiful, the repeated use of the word 'handling' when referring to Sanji, and how damn hot that is. The predatory look on Zoro's face, the idea of him and Robin actually working together to ravish Sanji. The lovely, ridiculously cute expression on his face when he notices just how intricately he's been caught. Robin looked completely gorgeous with the wind blowing through her hair, and loved the way Robin drops the tie into Zoro's hand at the end. So over-the-top hot it shouldn't be legal without even being smutty. That takes a special kind of skill, and mastery of the power of suggestion, and you have both my dear. ♥

[luco-millian.livejournal.com]

You mean it actually worked?! I honestly didn't think I'd gotten it across very clear, or as strong as I wanted, but people get it!

This was difficult to post because I was so very scared that people would think it was silly, or cheesy or that they wouldn't get it. So, I've very glad I've been getting such good responses.

I may actually have the courage now to work on other stories floating around in my head. . .

[mailechan.livejournal.com]

Umm...yeah, that's hot, all right. Though just two little things?

"You'd be willing to let me something as beautiful as that..." I think it might work better with "let me (see? do? watch?) something..."

"I would love to see how you looked when handled, Sanji-san" I believe should be "look" to keep it in the proper tense.

[luco-millian.livejournal.com]

Yeah I knew there would be alot of errors in the text since I was just rushing things ^^;

But thanks for pointing them out. I know what I want to say and so when I look I see what I want to see and not what is actually there. . . .

[mailechan.livejournal.com]

*keeps staring*

You know, this is even better than most sex scenes, simply because everything is implied, and that can be hotter than the actual sex sometimes.

Wow... *can't stop admiring*

[luco-millian.livejournal.com]

I'm blushing dammit!

But since that is what i was hoping to get across I'm also very, very happy right now.

Thank you.

[aqua-eyes.livejournal.com]

Heee!

[luco-millian.livejournal.com]

.....I like that icon ^__^;

[luco-millian.livejournal.com]

You always have the most interesting comments..did you know that?

And, well it's not a drabble, but I hope it'll do? Because...it is your fault afterall.

I'm a puddle of goo

[onikotsu.livejournal.com]

That was such a good story! The last lines perfect the way Zoro sounds like he's directing a horse! Also Robin was beautiful, she's elegant in the way she moves and she just gives off a smart vibe. But even though she looks so calm we all know that she's doing a fangirl dance of joy in her head and going Mwahahahahahaha! I really loved this!!!!!!

Re: I'm a puddle of goo

[luco-millian.livejournal.com]

Robin, I am finding, is too much fun. There is just something so devious about her. She could do anything and still smile calmly....

But really, Zoro is the only one who could 'properly' handle Sanji ^___^

[maldoror-gw.livejournal.com]

Oooh, sneaky sneaky Robin ^_____^ Go girl! Of course, tying him up on the middle of the deck is not exactly discreet-...What am I talking about, Nami is around the corner selling tickets.

Great work, fantastic drawings, hot story, melted Mal.

[luco-millian.livejournal.com]

Robin knows how to get things done and I'm sure that's exactly what Nami is doing. I know I'd by a ticket...even if was just to hear Robin talk ^^;

....

I'm still very pleased that people liked the story.

[ripfangdragon.livejournal.com]

*sputters happily*

[luco-millian.livejournal.com]

I take it you like? ^____^

[kala-aira.livejournal.com]

oh...yummm. That last line gave me the tingles.

I just loved all the compairisons between Sanji and the horses and then that panel of Robin basicly handing Zoro the 'reins' as it were...just lovely.

(and hot of course- can't forget that!)

[luco-millian.livejournal.com]

*laughs* I didn't expect this to come off as 'hot' as everyone says it is. I'm more then pleased with the results though and that the last panel had the impact I wanted.

[obsidianne.livejournal.com]

My My... Is that a lil smirk I see on Sanji-kun's face in the last panel? lol.

I just adore you! The beautiful manga's not bad too. ^_~

Love the panel with the wind lowing in Robi's hair and the one with her eyes closed.

And, of course, the Hawtness of all the panel's Especially the last one goes without saying. ^^

[luco-millian.livejournal.com]

It could very well be a smirk ^___^ We'll never know for sure though.

[hii-chan.livejournal.com]

Fuuu~ Robin the Yaoi fangirl!!! That is great!! ^_____^
And seriously, even though I'm a girl, I really feel like wearing a tie now ^^" Your obsession with ties is contagious!!

BTW, is that true what Robin said about ties? Because I never knew that and it's interesting ^.^

[luco-millian.livejournal.com]

Ties are comfortble ^___^ I have a bunny pirate one which I often wear and yes, what Robin said is true. That is what ties were once called and why. It started in England >_>

[travellyr.livejournal.com]

*LAAAAAUGHING* Sanji's FACE in the top-right of the last page! XD Robin plays him like a HARP. Hell, like something considerably simpler than a harp. She plays him like a KAZOO. And I LOVE it.
Zoro/Sanji/Zoro with VoyeurEnabler!Robin is one of my favoritest things in the world. ♥

Thanks so much for sharing this with us!

[luco-millian.livejournal.com]

Gotta love Robin for that ^___^ She always knows just what to do. And well, Sanji is so easy to abuse and love. . .

[imagines.livejournal.com]

I own three pretty ties and wear them often, because they are fabulous. Sanji is also faboulous. Therefore, Sanji + ties > everything. /coherency

...ohgodties *___*

[imagines.livejournal.com]

...um. Yes, Sanji is so fabulous that he is faboulous. *can spel gud!*

[leaper182.livejournal.com]

My brain broke from the pretty. And the hot.

*falls down*