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You can tell me what you think of the first three pages of what I was mentioning in the last post. Remember they are rough. I have too many other things to work on ^^; This is just to get it on to paper so i remember it later.

And of course to get your guys opinions on whether or not I should finish it or not.









And Franky and Ussop, I'm so sorry about how you look ;____;

Date: 2007-08-11 02:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mailechan.livejournal.com
OMG, that's FUNNY! *loves you so much*

Date: 2007-08-11 03:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emeraldus.livejournal.com
Poor poor Sanji! He's gonna get taught to death, isn't he? LOL!

Date: 2007-08-11 04:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] inferni-spei.livejournal.com
OMG
Chopper lecturing on the importance of sex KILLS XD

Date: 2007-08-11 04:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] leafnin.livejournal.com
Hahaha, poor Sanji. He just can't win, until today perhaps~

Please finish? *glittery puppy dog eyes of DOOM*

Date: 2007-08-11 05:09 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] travellyr.livejournal.com
*LAUGHING HELPLESSLY*
Sanji initially with this "okay..." face... not yet pissed off, because, hey, ROBIN-CHAN is holding him down! And Nami-san is there watching him! That can't be bad! Chopper with the pointer just set it up. The look on Sanji's face when he started talking about sex UNDID me.
....by the time Luffy glomped him I clearly heard Sanji speaking across time, manga volumes, distance, reality, sketches, and the internet to INFORM US ALL that he is now in a completely new level of hell, reserved JUST FOR HIM.

...I love you. XD

I like where this is going XD

Date: 2007-08-11 05:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dried-frog-pill.livejournal.com
Oh god, you had me with Chopper and his pointer. His expression! Oh Sanji you are so so very doomed but in the best possible way XD Or Sanji strapped into the chair with Luffy behind him, omggggggggg. And the second page, Chopper's worried expression is so misleading, Chopper you sneaky thing adorable and endearing and then he mentions sex and Sanji's WTF face is always a joy XD XD XD

And all of the third page is total love, all of it. TOTAL. UTTER. LOVE. NOTHING BUT AND MAYBE NAKAMA!SEX'NS. Just for Sanji XD XD XD Omg plz to be continuing, y/y/y/y/y. Y.

Date: 2007-08-11 05:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dried-frog-pill.livejournal.com
Also, Franky's smirk in the last page so kills. I think I may have to make the third page my desktop or something, so I can snicker every time I see it XD XD

Date: 2007-08-11 05:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] devlinnreiko.livejournal.com
^__^ This looks like its going to be awesome. Great success.

I love how you've drawn Franky!!

Back to my gushing about the idea, I can't wait to see how this plays out. I'm for finishing it.

Date: 2007-08-11 06:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chibi-trillian.livejournal.com
CHOPPER FTMFW.

You must continue! Sanji's failure at life brings joy to my heart, and this has revived my ever-futile hope that I may one day see Usopp singing the lyrics to "The Humpty Dance" in a fic or comic.

:)

Date: 2007-08-11 10:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] onikotsu.livejournal.com
Because everyone wants to be told off about their lack of sex by a reindeer that looks like he's what five years old? Sanji welcome to a kind of hell with a bunch of sexy devils but no fire. Sanji, Chopper and Luffy have wonderful expressions. *Goes back to stare at pages some more*

Date: 2007-08-11 11:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hii-chan.livejournal.com
Oooh, I'd sooo love to see a finished, cleaned up version of that!!
It really cracked me up, even just the 3 pages ^.~

Just...a question.... is this gonna end up as a mass orgy (in that case I'm not sure if I wanna read it ^^") or a ZoSan (in which case I definitely wanna read it!!)?

Date: 2007-08-11 12:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maderr.livejournal.com

*dies laughing*

Date: 2007-08-11 12:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] luco-millian.livejournal.com
I like being loved ^______^

Date: 2007-08-11 12:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] luco-millian.livejournal.com
Well, not to death >_> But he will probably be tired ^^; and wanting to die (of embarrassment) by the end. . .

Date: 2007-08-11 12:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] luco-millian.livejournal.com
Chopper is what makes this one ^_____^ He is too much fun to draw and really, he's only concerned about Sanji's health.

Date: 2007-08-11 12:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] luco-millian.livejournal.com
Oh I'll finish ^___^ It's just 21 pages, i can do that this weekend! I'm actually surprised people like this one. Wasn't sure how it would go over >_>

Date: 2007-08-11 12:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] luco-millian.livejournal.com
Yeah, Sanji didn't know what he agreed to when Robin 'helped' him into that room ^____^ But it's for his own good. Honest.

Date: 2007-08-11 12:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] luco-millian.livejournal.com
Chopper has been a joy to draw in this ^____^ he's just so expressive and innocent of what exactly he's setting Sanji up for! I love him!

And really, the last page hints on how sappy the ending turned out to be, all because of Franky. Ah well. I've learned by now that I'm not really in charge of my art and to let it go where it may. . .

Date: 2007-08-11 12:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] luco-millian.livejournal.com
So Franky looks alright? This is my first time drawing the whole crew. . .and it's hard ^^;

But hopefully you guys like the rest of it as much as you liked these three pages.

Date: 2007-08-11 12:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] luco-millian.livejournal.com
Humpty Dance?

....

It is quite possible that that may indeed happen someday >_> And yes, Chopper is indeed running the show here ^___^ i adore working with him, I really do!

((oh and have you written anything yet? Just so I know whether or not to start attempting Smoker/Zeff yet...))

Re: :)

Date: 2007-08-11 12:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] luco-millian.livejournal.com
Chopper is a MAN!!! But yeah, it is rather embarrassing having him telling you off, in front of the whole crew. . . and then them offering to help >_>

Date: 2007-08-11 12:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] luco-millian.livejournal.com
It won't be a mass orgy. He will be pictured with other members yes. But one at a time, and they're just...drawings...

It will be suggested that Zoro should be the partner he seeks most often to 'practice' but, we shall see how it ends up. When it's done and I've posted it, I'll give you a summary of what's in, so you can decide whether or not you want to read it.

Does that sound good?

Date: 2007-08-11 12:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] luco-millian.livejournal.com
Good! Because you need a good laugh ^____^

*snuggles*

Date: 2007-08-11 01:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hii-chan.livejournal.com
Um...yeah... that'd be nice ^^"
I'm sorry that I'm like this >_< .
If it's a pairing I like, I don't mind reading the smuttiest and most explicit doujinshi out there, but when it comes to mass orgies or pairings I don't like, I usually stay away from that ^^"
Because, you know..for me, they're not just drawings. They're characters that grew on me and that have a life of their own...

Do I sound too strange? ^^"

Date: 2007-08-11 01:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stephaniecmc.livejournal.com
Just....just...just...
GYAAAAAAHHH!!!
*cracks up and falls backwards off bed*
OMG! What is Luffy going to teach him?
"See, Sanji..you have to lick it like it's a big piece of juicy MEAT!"
*shot*

I love the fact that Zoro is wearing a jacket...and Usopp isn't wearing anything under his overalls XDDDD

I can so see Sanji soaking up the lessons like a sponge and teaching Zoro a thing or two later ^_____^

Date: 2007-08-11 02:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] farfan.livejournal.com
XD
just great. please gimme more!!!!!!

Date: 2007-08-11 02:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] luco-millian.livejournal.com
I didn't mean just drawings in that way...I meant in the comic they show him actual drawings on a chart ^^; But I understand what you mean and will do my best to let you know whether or not you'll want to see this when it's finished.

Date: 2007-08-11 03:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] luco-millian.livejournal.com
Actually, you are very close to what part Luffy has ^_____^

Date: 2007-08-11 03:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] luco-millian.livejournal.com
More is coming ^____^ I'm on page 7 now >_>

Date: 2007-08-11 03:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stephaniecmc.livejournal.com
Yay!! I almost-guessed Luffy's part ^_____^
Hrm...Chopper would be fun, though...coz he's all furry and cuddly...but just looking at Chopper and thinking of that make me feel like a perverted pedophile ;____;

Date: 2007-08-11 04:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dried-frog-pill.livejournal.com
I think that's how Chopper could get away with most of the deviousness, because you never know if he's actually being devious, or if it's just earnest innocence. Or both. And who would suspect such a cute little guy, anyway? XD Love!

Ahahaha, but see, I love the third page, so even if it's sappy, I'm pretty sure I'll still love it. And Franky is a huge sap, I'm only finally starting to realize it. He's all large-and-obnoxious and then he whips out that guitar and you realize he's a sweetheart on the inside. Or something. XD

Date: 2007-08-11 05:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hii-chan.livejournal.com
Oh, so they won't actually sleep with him and show him practically how it's done, but just theoratically? 0.o
That cracks me up even more ^_____^

And thank you for understanding!!
I'll probably read it anyways, it's just a matter of me saving it on computer or not afterwards ^^"

Date: 2007-08-11 06:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] luco-millian.livejournal.com
Franky is indeed one big bluff of fluff ^____^ he's a sweetheart when he wants to be, but doesn't want to admit it.

Or at least that is how he appears to me, so we shall see how other's react to the ending scene. I'm only on page 9 though. . . still 12 more pages to go >_

Date: 2007-08-11 06:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ahja-reyn.livejournal.com
awwwww! Poor Sanji!! (wants to swoop in and save the poor guy)

Date: 2007-08-11 08:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chibi-trillian.livejournal.com
I'd settle for "Both how I'm livin' and my nose is large!" *dies of dorkitude*

((No writing yet. SUPERFAIL. Possibly because I keep getting distracted by a certain obscenely expensive new hobby. Delmar's penpal is in customs as we speak. ♥))

Date: 2007-08-11 10:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kala-aira.livejournal.com
Oh God...Chopper and his pointer!!!!!! XD
That is pretty much one of the most amusing panels ever.
'The crew has informed me that you have not has sex with any of them'
*dies*

What helpful Nakama Sanji has, Luffy looks so excitied to be a teacher!

Date: 2007-08-12 01:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] key-revolution.livejournal.com
Without the entire concept being great and luffy (and chopper) being ZOMGADORABLE, I'd read this just because of Sanji's expression in the last panel.

I WANT TO ICON THAT.

Date: 2007-08-12 01:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scribe-protra.livejournal.com
OH GOD. I am been dithering on wiether or not to friend you cause zomg very pretty arts, and THIS JUST. YEAH.

[waves] Hello! I'm going to friend you now cause I horribly want to know what happens next! Cause these three pages CRACK ME UP.

Date: 2007-08-12 01:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] luco-millian.livejournal.com
Delmar is very excited that he'll soon have someone to talk to ^____^ And I can easily understand how that could distract you >_> I could do nothing else but sit and wait when it was time for my boy to show up. . .

Date: 2007-08-12 01:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] luco-millian.livejournal.com
But this is for his own good and besides, they'll take care of him ^____^

Date: 2007-08-12 01:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] luco-millian.livejournal.com
Chopper is too amusing in this...well at least he's amusing to draw ^___^ Especially later on >_>

But yes, Sanji has such wonderful people looking out for him!

Date: 2007-08-12 01:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] luco-millian.livejournal.com
Go for it! Although the expressions get a little more amusing as it goes on >_> So you may want to wait >_>

Date: 2007-08-12 01:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] luco-millian.livejournal.com
*laughs* I'm so very glad people like this since it amused me so ^____^ Hopefully the rest of the pages don't disappoint!

And welcome ^____^

Date: 2007-09-16 06:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] meramerawolf242.livejournal.com
strawhat orgy? nice! XD hope theres more! X3

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