Because I've been told I'm a tease. . .

[luco]

You can tell me what you think of the first three pages of what I was mentioning in the last post. Remember they are rough. I have too many other things to work on ^^; This is just to get it on to paper so i remember it later.

And of course to get your guys opinions on whether or not I should finish it or not.









And Franky and Ussop, I'm so sorry about how you look ;____;

Comments

[dried-frog-pill.livejournal.com]

I think that's how Chopper could get away with most of the deviousness, because you never know if he's actually being devious, or if it's just earnest innocence. Or both. And who would suspect such a cute little guy, anyway? XD Love!

Ahahaha, but see, I love the third page, so even if it's sappy, I'm pretty sure I'll still love it. And Franky is a huge sap, I'm only finally starting to realize it. He's all large-and-obnoxious and then he whips out that guitar and you realize he's a sweetheart on the inside. Or something. XD

[luco-millian.livejournal.com]

Franky is indeed one big bluff of fluff ^____^ he's a sweetheart when he wants to be, but doesn't want to admit it.

Or at least that is how he appears to me, so we shall see how other's react to the ending scene. I'm only on page 9 though. . . still 12 more pages to go >_