Nanomango!

[luco]

So yes, I'm joining in on the 'Nano' fun this year, only since I can't write, I do the art version ^___^ And after trying to decide what I wanted to do for the next 30 days...I finally settled on this.

The Ouran High/One Piece Crossover thing! So this month I hope to do the first story. Wish me luck?





Oh yes! And It's only a quick pen drawing, so it's rough and the backgrounds make no sense, I apologize in advance.

Comments

[renegadelufin.livejournal.com]

Just a small crit from a storyboarding viewpoint. Your character's main direction seems to be from L to R, but in the second panel he is going from R to L. I might suggest horizontally flipping that one panel, just to make things clear and continuous.

I like, though! :) Looking forward to seeing more.

[luco-millian.livejournal.com]

Hmmmm, I may reverse that panel and see how it looks, but thanks for that ^___^ It'll give me something to play with!