Luco-san, your inking is *gorgeous*. The markers are working, too.
You might work on the speech balloon and text font/weight. (I would suggest simpler lettering so it doesn't distract from the art -- use a same-width font?) In the side panels, the words seem to overwhelm the art.
I want to poke you in your lack of self-confidence. This is amazing. :) OMG, seeing Yosuke's poses up closer is... hee! It really does convey his character really, really well.
I love how neither of them are really listening. I love how you draw these guys and the greyscale look is really nice! And everyone's ezpressions are really versatile and SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
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Date: 2009-01-08 03:26 am (UTC)You might work on the speech balloon and text font/weight. (I would suggest simpler lettering so it doesn't distract from the art -- use a same-width font?) In the side panels, the words seem to overwhelm the art.
Which rocks. ♥
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Date: 2009-01-08 03:27 am (UTC)no subject
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Date: 2009-01-08 07:07 pm (UTC)~Swyrel
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Date: 2009-01-11 01:32 pm (UTC)I love how neither of them are really listening. I love how you draw these guys and the greyscale look is really nice! And everyone's ezpressions are really versatile and SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
I'd say it was a major suceed!