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So, a lot has happened. And a lot of it has been REALLY BAD. But, I'm alive, managing and figured that life has gone through the lowest it can go at this point and has to go up now.

And i will hold to that.

But for now, instead of an update about me, you get what I've been playing with. This is the first in a series of Avatar Fan-comics I wanna do and the only one you'll get in whole for two reasons: one, because I wanna see if I got the feel right and what you people think and two, well simply because I'm not sure what I want to do with them yet.

So here:

Oh and it has a G rating.























Too me, it's amusing to see how I change and slightly improve over the span of just 10 pages... Or maybe I'm the only one who sees it...

Date: 2009-10-14 04:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sannask.livejournal.com
i admit.

i lolled pretty hard. X D.


it seems the subtle art change is most noticeable between the pages of 'splash' and 'happy now?'. to me it looks like you got a better handle on the faces and stuff.

second to last one, "no, that's because you tried to get out,' sokka's chest looks.... kind of deformed : x. as for the rest, many thumbs up. also i'm still chuckling over here. X D D.

Date: 2009-10-14 05:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] luco-millian.livejournal.com
Good. It's suppose to make you smile and laugh.

And yeah, at that point I sat down and started sketching out the characters every morning to loosen up...and that panel...hmmm. I see what you mean but not sure how to fix it...

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