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[luco]

Well it's official...the Plot Bunnies have taken over my life.....some might remember that after I had posted the pic of Evil and Chain that I mentioned they wanted their own story...

They're getting it ^^;;;;; In school today I drew the next four pages.....hopefully you can read my writing....and be warned...very quickly drawn so not everything looks right. . .

















And this page would be followed by the following conversation.....

Boy: Me?

Priestess: Yes you. You're mother just died, your father is somewhere out there alive, you had that moddy, silent brooding that usually accompanies heroic/stupid actions...

You're in the perfect position to start your own story and they want to control it.

Boy: Oh....


So...now you can help me.....but first ingnore the bad dialouge....

Now then...should I continue this or hide it away where it will never attack me again???

Comments

[luco-millian.livejournal.com]

Oh good so my sense of humor isn't completely off ^^;;;;;

But how is the layout...are the panels easy to follow??

[branchandroot]

The layout is good. I keep having the urge to read left to right, but that's just acculteration. It would be easier if they were colored, so the text could be set off from the picture, but the flow leads the eye across and down nicely.

[luco-millian.livejournal.com]

Coloured or just inked and shaded? That's the next big debate after the "do I keep going" one.....

[branchandroot]

Hmmmmmmm. I think I vote for color. I love lineart dearly, but when you have a bunch of text, too, I think color is best.

[luco-millian.livejournal.com]

hmmm colour than....okay ^____^ I shall see what I can do!!