I'm Sorry...

[luco]

I really do not like this page ;___; I'm going to have to beg your forgivness for the quality of the art today. I guess the weather and stuff has really gotten me down.

Will probably re-do this page in the future if it bothers people, but for now I'll leave it so that I can advance the story....





Now to finish packing, and tommorrow I'll be back at school finally.

Comments

[mailechan.livejournal.com]

I have no idea why you are dissatisfied with this page. I LOVE Chopperfish's teary eyes--he's so CUTE! And that profile shot of Sanji is really, really reminiscent of Japanese manga styles, where you see the smile, but the eyes are hidden so that you can't tell if he's being evil or nice, or something in between.

You know, I like how Chopper's got hooves instead of hands. He just looks so darned adorable.

And don't believe him, Chopper! Mer-Sanji is SO going to get in trouble!

[luco-millian.livejournal.com]

Chopperfish can't be anything but cute it seems....although we'll never tell him that >_> And you're right that he should be worried about Sanji, but Sanji knows just how to distract him....

[mailechan.livejournal.com]

So it seems. I love how casual Mer-Sanji is as he leans on Chopperfish's hat. And how Chopperfish is flailing around.

[luco-millian.livejournal.com]

That's the panel that gave me so many problems and I'm still not sure of......

[mailechan.livejournal.com]

*staaaaares at it* To be perfectly honest, it looks really good to me. Mer-Sanji is absolutely perfect. The way he's holding his leaf and slouching a little on Chopperfish is just like the real Sanji to me.

I think the only thing I would wonder at is Chopperfish's arms. The position they are in makes me think he's leaning forward, which sort of throws off the technical aspect of things. Maybe if they had little motion waves, like he was flailing instead, it would look more like he was just being squished down by Mer-Sanji?

[luco-millian.livejournal.com]

So maybe it is just my mood that is making me not like this page...

I do realize that Chopper's arms are too stiff though. Of course I only noticed after it was inked and mostly shaded ^^;

[mailechan.livejournal.com]

Actually, the stiffness makes it better. It's like he was caught by surprise and is trying to catch himself, while forgetting he's a fish now. I find it funnier this way.

[luco-millian.livejournal.com]

*snorts* Yeah, he probably would forget he's a fish once in a while. I mean, he is half reindeer and all >_>;