School work again.

[luco]

So, if our teacher had been healthy, today i would have done my story pitch. But seeing as he is not, I rushed and panicked for nothing...

And thus was left with all these little drawings and no one to show them to, so you guys get tortured once again! Aren't you lucky? Well, I actually turned them all into one big drawing with text so that you can follow along...but really, because I didn't get to do the pitch and get opinions from classmates and teachers, I figured I'd see what you guys thought of it. This is just the really rough basics of the story, so feel free to ask questions, state opinions etc. I'm going to consider this a test run for when I do have to present it.

And I apologize for the quality of the drawings as they were rushed and done completely with a ball point pen. Also, let me know if you can figure out what time period and where it takes place.




Not as cheerful as what I normally do, but I guess it kind of gives you an idea of the kind of mood and mind set I've been in lately. . .

Comments

[kitten0face.livejournal.com]

Those ARE awesome storyboards. I liked it :)

Death's character design stuck out. I really liked it.

Is it set in London? Or just Generic Europe?

I also really liked the old woman's face where she is holding Anna as a doll.

[luco-millian.livejournal.com]

I'm glad, because I wanted death to not look like he belonged with the others and it seems to have worked and yes, it is generic London, Victorian age so this is good.